if you insist on taking the 2 action boys, or even one you can lower the agility to 8 or 6 and place more into intelligence if it is a crafter, if it's a burster you need more luck for a dual BRD... DPS is pretty important, even for SG bursters...
and lower the strength to 5, it's plenty if you're gonna take pack rat...
dodger is still useless, so add a better perk there...
fast metabolism (more like fat metabolic degeneration...) is a waste of a trait, if you're gonna use 1 handers get 1 handed, it doesn't get any better that blasting a guy in the face with a .223 pistol and it will save you quite a bit of SP in the end...