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Total Members Voted: 55

Voting closed: January 18, 2011, 08:56:32 pm

[Keldorn]

And thats the beauty of constructive criticism.  I included in-game gangs as a tongue in cheek reference but it can be taken out and the message remain the same.  I know there are some run on sentences but the commas are meant as breakers for the narrator.

[corosive]

wow i totally missed this one... this still open?

[Michaelh139]

wow i totally missed this one... this still open?

Nah, number 7 won.

[Bantz]

Besides, I don't think it's a good idea to include references to actual ingame Gangs or such in that, Keldorn.

Why not to include in-gangs reference? Most content is created by them.NPC faction right now are not worth mentioning, for exemple BoS serves only as a source of cheap ammo:D

[Wipe]

Why not to include in-gangs reference? Most content is created by them.

It is?

[Wichura]

Why not to include in-gangs reference? Most content is created by them.

Yeah, ask CS for example. Except "omfg u n00b i pwn u" they cannot into english.

Besides it's the best way to start yet another flamewar about gang e-penises.

[skejwen]

It took "some" time to sum this up. Here is list of participants, bold one is winner of our lil contest (but in fact everyone that took part should feel like a winner, all in all it was only about making something creative):

1. skejwen
2. Andr3aZ
3. manian112
4. Kiljoy Sean
5. John Porno
6. headshot
7. Keldorn

[Keldorn]

I can't seem to get the scripter to work but I can submit material for Holodiscs/RP/Quests/etc.

[Reiniat]

i unfortunately lose this contest and i wanted to participe. i made my own intro script, but i was unable to send it, now i want to post it, i think is worst than the one of Keldorn, and also have a lot of sintax, and verbaltime errors since im Mexican and i dont know properly english (i only know "chicano") but i want to post my intro script, only for my selfhapyness  

77 years has gone since the Vault Dweller choosed his fate, destroying the Master and the mutant army, he may die believing that a new world of hope and peace will begin, but war...war never changes.
Now is the year 2238,  the northern cityes fell into a permanent anarchy state, now big legions of gangs disput the control of the remains of old setlements, city by city, room by room, wasteland has never seen that combat since before the Big War.
In the south the corrupted NCR tries to keep his status of republic and his expansionist purposes, but they are at the border of the civil war, the otherdays justice city of Fresno is now the refuge of the scum of the wastes.
Long time ago Enclave and the Brotherhood where the most powerful factions in the wasteland, but now powerful gangs has been growing up making his new laws in the tired desert, now they all are only little pieces in the big chess of the wasteland.
Meanwhile the forces of the Caesar looks from the east, planning the genocide, trying to take what NCR dont deserves.
Now you are nothing, so what will you do when the truly apocalipsis begins?

[Haraldx]

There are quite many grammar mistakes

[Michaelh139]

-snip-

 2238 has absolutely nothing to do with Caesar's Legion.

Other then it's good.

@haraldax:  He mentioned that...

[Surf]

 2238 has absolutely nothing to do with Caesar's Legion.

You'll be surprised.

[Michaelh139]

You'll be surprised.

Well not this 2238 anyways...  It's been mentioned the devs will not be including caesar's legion into the game.

Took the time to fix it up by the way:

77 years has gone by since the Vault Dweller chose his fate, destroying the Master and the mutant army. He may die believing that a new world of hope and peace will begin, but war...  war never changes.
Now it is the year 2238.  The northern cities fell into a permanent state of anarchy. Now large legions of gangs dispute the control of the remains of old setlements. City by city, room by room.  The wasteland has never seen this kind of combat since before the Great War.

In the south the corrupted NCR tries to keep its status of republic and its expansionist ways.  But they are at the border of the civil war. Other days, justice city of Fresno is now the refuge of the scum of the wastes.
Meanwhile the forces of the Caesar looks from the east, planning the genocide, trying to take what NCR dont deserves.

Now you are nothing, so what will you do when the truly apocalypse begins?

@below:  Where is the part of bos/enclave?

[Reiniat]

You'll be surprised.

yes now there are Dam patrols and Powder Gangers pwtrolling the wasteland, it is not relationed to New Vegas but Van Burem, also i know it is gramatically a ghoul  . but if you could read the spanish version...

also i modified my post to include something about BOS and enclave wich i see good to include

[Surf]

Well not this 2238 anyways...  It's been mentioned the devs will not be including caesar's legion into the game.

Yeah, I'm talking out of the blue.  Anyway, you'll see.