Total Members Voted: 31
I think it could go on a little be longer showing only his shadow and feet as he walks and does whatever action.Or you could go the more cliche way, and immediately now, show his face, with his hands to his eyes keeping sun out.Unless I am way off here?
i think the foot should go through the ground with the guy falling into the underground with which he falls into a swarm of ants below. i could carry on but i dont wat to tell the whole story .....
But more to the point... who is this guy in the fonline 2238 universe? where is he going? Is he the main character?...Did that ant have a mum?? and if so I think she will be a tad upset!
Interesting idea , but i'm wondering what he did before , it could determine the future Some simple , short background of what is he and happened before.Let's name him Joe. Joe is a mercenary that was just looking for a job in NCR , he was hired to escort and guard a traveling caravan witch was doing a run from Shady Sands to Hub , looked like an ordinary job for him as it's not the first time Joe does something like that. Everything went to hell when their caravan was ambushed by raiders , Joe with the caravan managed to escape their grasp as it was impossible to fight the raider overwhelming numbers and fled few days in a random direction to a point where there was no chance but to fight back. Luckily during the intense fighting through smoke and fire , wounded he managed to sneak away and avoid them as almost all the caravan members were slaughtered.Disoriented and injured Joe finds himself in a desert with completely no idea where is he located , with minimal food supply yet armed to the teeth , he is trying to reach any civilization in order to survive otherwise things will get grim if he doesn't. Ye , i was bored.
he's armed to the teeth!! but with what??
Fonline 2238 COMMUNITY COMIC where YOU tell the story!!
The guy meets 2 raiders and he pulls out a minigun and burst one of themand the other one gets scared and runs away