First of all, don't quote from fallout 3, create your own story, show us that you really want to make something out of this faction.
Secondly, I think you should make it look more professional, not like "y dont you join us?", instead type something like,
"You are welcome to join The United States Republic."
And last, don't double post!
You did this:
Yes that would be great! We could use you guys!
As to all others we need MORE people! =D
Then
Thank you all! We could use more people!
and funding? we are almost there!
Instead of double posting press the edit button and merge the posts.
Like this:
Yes that would be great! We could use you guys!
As to all others we need MORE people! =D
EDIT: Thank you all! We could use more people!
and funding? we are almost there!
Other than that, I wish you good luck and I hope you survive out there in the wasteland!