Theres only a few things wrong i can see...
A: the rescue call could be used as a PK Trap...
B: The Wages can be abused by mass repeat
C: Nothing

Lets get started on this ASAP

Edit:
Ideas for BoS
If you find a BoS Vs Rem or Float+Cents You can enter and help the BoS and they'll Thank you with Faction Rep (1 per hit)
If you encounter Enclave, and wipe there ass

then you can get 100 Faction Rep (Better start packing

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