You may take Small Frame instead of Jinxed and make 6 ST and take stonewall perk, so angry snipers won't knock you down with 10 EN and will knock you out 2 times less often. Or just remove 1 point from... something.. for example, why do you need 3 CH? 1 CH is enough, so you can make 1 CH, 6 ST and 8 IN. Stonewall take instead of Dodger. Or 1 point from CH, so you'll have 2 CH, buy beer at bar, drink it, and you'll have 3 CH, if you really need this, but I still can't understand why someone need more than 1 CH, if he isn't slaver or taxi.
Also make fun/wierd name for thief. So if guards will say it, someone may laught or not understand what he is talking about.