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Author Topic: [Contest] Monologue script for FO2238 Intro - Voting thread!  (Read 9264 times)

Michaelh139

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Re: [Contest] Monologue script for FO2238 Intro - Voting thread!
« Reply #45 on: May 12, 2011, 11:11:09 pm »

Yeah, I'm talking out of the blue.  ::) Anyway, you'll see.
We don't have Caesar's Legion, because we are in the year 2238.  Schizophrenic nightkins and powder gangers are not an invention of FNV.  Hoover Dam caravan is in the game since a year or so as well.
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Re: [Contest] Monologue script for FO2238 Intro - Voting thread!
« Reply #46 on: May 12, 2011, 11:20:29 pm »

ok maybe legion dont exist yet, but in 2238 NCR has not begin his expansion.
so who are the Hoover Patrol?

PD: i will striketrough that part of my script
come on dont make a discussion about story line and canons, this is an artistic treath, also im not participating in it, i just showing my history, and dont tell me that then i should put it in the Fan Art section because anyway people will discusse about the legion
« Last Edit: May 12, 2011, 11:24:39 pm by Reiniat »
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Re: [Contest] Monologue script for FO2238 Intro - Voting thread!
« Reply #47 on: May 13, 2011, 12:41:14 am »

It has been a long 77 years since the defeat of the master and his army.  The Vault Dweller, believeing that a new period of hope and peace had been ushered in, passed away with a clear concience.

But war, war never changes.

In 2238, the northern cities are in perpetual anarchy.  Factional control is in a constant state of change, with no peace within sight.  Block by block, room by room, the fighting is brutal.  The horrors of urban combat, not seen since the days of the great war, is considered part of daily life.

In the south, the NCR has grown decadent.  After years of un-interrupted rule, it vainly continues its expansionist goals.  However, they are on the brink of civil war.  

The Brotherhood Of Steel and the Enclave, continue to operate.  Unfortunately, their policies of isolation have left them with no armies to execute policy.  Their high technology, left un-used in their armories.  With their fall came the rise of other gangs.  They too, are now just pieces, to the chessboard of the wastes.

Meanwhile in the East, a new powerful faction has emerged.  Taking their name from an empire of old, they plan on orchestratng a new genocide.  Plans have been made to take what the NCR cannot hold onto.

A new apocalypse has been ushered in.  How will you survive?

Just my take on Reinats contribution.  I like how it is closer to the intros from 1 and 2, with mention to the previous Fallouts.
« Last Edit: May 13, 2011, 01:01:43 am by Keldorn »
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Re: [Contest] Monologue script for FO2238 Intro - Voting thread!
« Reply #48 on: May 13, 2011, 01:50:55 am »

Reiniat, that depends on what you considering NCR not beggining their expansion, in 2241 they controlled the hub, boneyard and several other areas (granted thats 3 years after the server but I can't find a specific date on when they controlled those) i think it's safe to assume they technically "should" control those in game and as such have obviously expanded a bit, legion does indeed not exist yet (haven't played the van buren demo could be wrong since if anything i would go by that rather than bethseda, but according to bethseda the legion was created a bit later, Caesar being only 12 in the year 2238, Not quite sure what you mean about who are the hoover patrol, but possibly you are talking about the Desert rangers (before they joined the ncr rangers)

Also, how can you say to not make it about cannon, without cannon an intro would be semi shit, IMO.
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Re: [Contest] Monologue script for FO2238 Intro - Voting thread!
« Reply #49 on: May 13, 2011, 02:39:03 am »

Reiniat, that depends on what you considering NCR not beggining their expansion, in 2241 they controlled the hub, boneyard and several other areas (granted thats 3 years after the server but I can't find a specific date on when they controlled those) i think it's safe to assume they technically "should" control those in game and as such have obviously expanded a bit, legion does indeed not exist yet (haven't played the van buren demo could be wrong since if anything i would go by that rather than bethseda, but according to bethseda the legion was created a bit later, Caesar being only 12 in the year 2238, Not quite sure what you mean about who are the hoover patrol, but possibly you are talking about the Desert rangers (before they joined the ncr rangers)

Also, how can you say to not make it about cannon, without cannon an intro would be semi shit, IMO.
there is actually a encounter called Dam Patrol in fonline,i dont know who are they, but the Desert Rangers supposition soundsprobably, i go to thw holy bible to be sure.
my intro cant be the official intro since Keldorn win, but yes without canon is useless

also about the aport of keldorn, its beautiful to see my intro without grammatic misspells, also you make it an profesional job. also i do the intro without seen the other intros, i actually see the contest post one day before of my vacations, i go to my ranch and write my intro, but when i come back it was close, i get thirsty and forget about it, until i get to this treath again and see the winners and the intros, i sincerously think that my intro is better than most of the intros, tough it has a horrible grammatic, if i just can come back three months..... or 15 years and properly learn english :'(
« Last Edit: May 13, 2011, 02:45:07 am by Reiniat »
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Andr3aZ

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Re: [Contest] Monologue script for FO2238 Intro - Voting thread!
« Reply #50 on: May 13, 2011, 07:37:04 pm »

Well, it was fun to create this but at the same time i find it really difficult to get near the original, especialy when listened to the spoken intro.
All time i wrote this i read it out loud to myself in a similar voice. I must say that pronouncing and timing is esential for a good feeling, so sad thing we had no altruistic professional voiceactors who could have voiced the entries.

I congratulate all other participants and of course the winner of this little creativity contest. :)
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