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FLIPBOOK VERSION
http://artdesignmedia.weebly.com/comics.html
Fonline 2238 COMMUNITY COMIC where YOU tell the story!!
I Would like to know what you guys think should happen in the next page!
Use your Imaginations!... But try to keep it simple and to the point, as we can
build on narrative as we go.
You may present your ideas as a summary within around a paragraph or even as a storyboard with
cool stick-man thumbnails to explain your ideas if you prefer!
Please vote upon other peoples ideas and don't be afraid to present one to me yourself as all ideas will be
considered and appreciated (not only that but it will be fun!)
Try not to deter too far from what is already happening in the last page.. try and make it flow!
Im excited to see what we can come up with together :) Good luck and have FUN!!
(http://www.weebly.com/uploads/1/1/1/6/11169495/9607940.jpg?1333404094)
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I think it could go on a little be longer showing only his shadow and feet as he walks and does whatever action.
Or you could go the more cliche way, and immediately now, show his face, with his hands to his eyes keeping sun out.
Unless I am way off here? :P
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I think it could go on a little be longer showing only his shadow and feet as he walks and does whatever action.
Or you could go the more cliche way, and immediately now, show his face, with his hands to his eyes keeping sun out.
Unless I am way off here? :P
your not off its a good idea... keeps it flowing nicely.. I will wait a day or two for any other ideas and if people start to vote... then work on the next page :)
But more to the point... who is this guy in the fonline 2238 universe? where is he going? Is he the main character?...
Did that ant have a mum?? and if so I think she will be a tad upset! :D
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i think the foot should go through the ground with the guy falling into the underground with which he falls into a swarm of ants below. i could carry on but i dont wat to tell the whole story .....:)
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i think the foot should go through the ground with the guy falling into the underground with which he falls into a swarm of ants below. i could carry on but i dont wat to tell the whole story .....:)
i like this idea, perhaps not falling in... but... disturbing a nest of ants could start the action off.
Could be interesting only using close up action then reveal the face when the dust settles.
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Ok so far we have one vote in favour of stamping on a sinkhole and falling into a nest of Giant ants :)
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But more to the point... who is this guy in the fonline 2238 universe? where is he going? Is he the main character?...
Did that ant have a mum?? and if so I think she will be a tad upset! :D
Interesting idea , but i'm wondering what he did before , it could determine the future :)
Some simple , short background of what is he and happened before.
Let's name him Joe. Joe is a mercenary that was just looking for a job in NCR , he was hired to escort and guard a traveling caravan witch was doing a run from Shady Sands to Hub , looked like an ordinary job for him as it's not the first time Joe does something like that. Everything went to hell when their caravan was ambushed by raiders , Joe with the caravan managed to escape their grasp as it was impossible to fight the raider overwhelming numbers and fled few days in a random direction to a point where there was no chance but to fight back. Luckily during the intense fighting through smoke and fire , wounded he managed to sneak away and avoid them as almost all the caravan members were slaughtered.
Disoriented and injured Joe finds himself in a desert with completely no idea where is he located , with minimal food supply yet armed to the teeth , he is trying to reach any civilization in order to survive otherwise things will get grim if he doesn't.
Ye , i was bored.
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Interesting idea , but i'm wondering what he did before , it could determine the future :)
Some simple , short background of what is he and happened before.
Let's name him Joe. Joe is a mercenary that was just looking for a job in NCR , he was hired to escort and guard a traveling caravan witch was doing a run from Shady Sands to Hub , looked like an ordinary job for him as it's not the first time Joe does something like that. Everything went to hell when their caravan was ambushed by raiders , Joe with the caravan managed to escape their grasp as it was impossible to fight the raider overwhelming numbers and fled few days in a random direction to a point where there was no chance but to fight back. Luckily during the intense fighting through smoke and fire , wounded he managed to sneak away and avoid them as almost all the caravan members were slaughtered.
Disoriented and injured Joe finds himself in a desert with completely no idea where is he located , with minimal food supply yet armed to the teeth , he is trying to reach any civilization in order to survive otherwise things will get grim if he doesn't.
Ye , i was bored.
It was a fun read and altogether a nice portrayal of our would be hero Nice bit of profiling! he's already psychologically scarred, and raiders may still be after him... Im glad somebody established the 'foot's' gender :) and the fact that he's armed to the teeth!! but with what?? and how badly injured are we talking?..
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how about a encounter.
you encouter a radscorpion (the large size)
does he get poisned?
does he eat the radscorpion after the kill?
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he's armed to the teeth!! but with what??
With a shotgun, a knife, a baton and 2 grenades. He had quite a lot of ammunition and more grenades but used up most of it.
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After he smacked an ant, a brainless bluesuiter with strange stupid ugliest ever face (1 IN 1 CH) runs to him laughing, punches his eyes, then kicks to death, starts dancing on his dead body laughing over whole wasteland that everyone in few kilometers can hear him, and then just running away in random direction.
Sorry, that's how my straight mind can see events.
Edit: Damn, what a fail, forgot to mention motivation:
Fonline 2238 COMMUNITY COMIC where YOU tell the story!!
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The guy meets 2 raiders and he pulls out a minigun and burst one of them
and the other one gets scared and runs away
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The guy meets 2 raiders and he pulls out a minigun and burst one of them
and the other one gets scared and runs away
No! The other guy doesn't run away, he attacks him with his bare hands just like in the game. :D
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LMAO Choclate chip cookies, you sir are a legend :)
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Make him the most jinxed (aka jinxedest) person in the world.
He is a real god: excellent in every.single.thing he undertakes, but failing dramatically everytime as unforseen circumstances occurs:
He wants to kill a brahmin with a bullet going through the 4 eyes ? He can could if only a windgust or a fly didn't deviate the bullet at the very last instant it could be possible to imagine.
He is very charismatic; but everytime he gets his friends killed or maimed without him doing anything out of the ordinary.
in short: it's a gobal threat, kill him.
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Make him the most jinxed (aka jinxedest) person in the world.
He is a real god: excellent in every.single.thing he undertakes, but failing dramatically everytime as unforseen circumstances occurs:
He wants to kill a brahmin with a bullet going through the 4 eyes ? He can could if only a windgust or a fly didn't deviate the bullet at the very last instant it could be possible to imagine.
He is very charismatic; but everytime he gets his friends killed or maimed without him doing anything out of the ordinary.
in short: it's a gobal threat, kill him.
This actually sounds really good.
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Ok guys I must ask you to stop your ideas for the moment as ive been working on the new page...
Ive gone with the ideas that had the most votes.. but as of now their is a tie between small guns and big guns....
so if you would like to continue the poll i'll know which weapon he whips out to kill with!..
(the next page he is falling through a giant sandtrap - probably Giant ants nest - because he is jinxed!)
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(http://www.weebly.com/uploads/1/1/1/6/11169495/9607940.jpg?1333404094)
Second Page is up! Lets continue with the story...
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What is on this picture...?
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What is on this picture...?
I see bluesuiter with face, that reminds trollface, and he (bluesuiter) is going to punch the eyes of jinxed guy, after that kick him to death and laugh on his body, then kick every ant in that hole and run away in random direction.
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What is on this picture...?
Its a sandtrap that our character gets caught in.