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Title: The Captain.
Post by: chocolate_chip_cookies on March 16, 2012, 11:55:42 pm

The Captain...
(http://i41.tinypic.com/30xe6ag.png)

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: ToxiCAVE on March 17, 2012, 12:05:16 am

legs are to short

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: chocolate_chip_cookies on March 17, 2012, 12:33:53 am

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Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: Berko on March 17, 2012, 02:27:30 am

We can see from your schema that Toxicave is not wrong, captain has some problems of proportions.
Beyond this it's nice (clothes, metal effects ..)
We wait for other drawings!

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: ToxiCAVE on March 17, 2012, 02:30:21 am

head and torso are to big, look where feet are and where are yours, they are little to short and cheast is to muscular.
but still good work

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: chocolate_chip_cookies on March 17, 2012, 03:00:27 am

Thanks.
I appreciate that you pointed it out in a polite way.
Is it any better now?
And Toxic, he is wearing combat armor underneath his coat. He's not muscular at all

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: Ox-Skull on March 26, 2012, 02:50:26 pm

Quote from: chocolate_chip_cookies on March 17, 2012, 03:00:27 am

(http://i40.tinypic.com/5ai7va.png)

Being cartoony in style, proportions dont matter so much as they would in a realistic looking character.

How are u at shading choc chip, cuz itd look sweet with some nice shading like on his jacket where folds and creases are IMO.
Looks like the kinda guy u dont want to get on the bad side of.
He need side pocket with bottle of Rot gut in it. :D

Good work.

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: chocolate_chip_cookies on March 27, 2012, 02:09:11 am

Thanks. I'm glad you get my drawing. I wouldn't try to disrespect the guy and yeah rot gut would be perfect.

It's more of a sketch so I'll leave it alone with shading. But do you mean shading with some program such as photoshop? I think it'd be pretty cool to color it and shade and whatever but I don't have photoshop skills.

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: Vandal on March 27, 2012, 10:13:02 pm

For some strange reason I don't see pictures from that site

Edit: I see it now, very nice drawing

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: Greencell on April 06, 2012, 04:59:59 pm

Overall a nice sketch but looks like him:

(http://www.us-way.de/neu/standup/817Popeye.jpg)

 ;D

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: The JokeR on April 19, 2012, 01:07:46 pm

Nice draw. this to me? ;D

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: cemooooooooo on May 04, 2012, 09:27:26 pm

Thats very nice Is It possibility some more

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: BurnedMan on May 16, 2012, 06:13:37 am

An excellent cartoon sketch of a die-hard, battle hardened, rag-tag wasteland veteran.. comprised of concepts, including the almost mythical sea-dog of the nineteenth century and radioactive grittiness.. In other words, Captain Ahab of Moby Dick meets a barrel of radioactive goo, and proceeds to hunt a white radscorpion which had taken his leg. This is my humble analysis of the drawing. Continue to explore and master your creative talents!

Title: Re: The Captain.
Post by: Gimper on May 22, 2012, 04:49:01 am

despite all the criticisms, i think it looks pretty awesome bro!