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Title: Gasstation
Post by: Archon93 on August 05, 2011, 04:09:09 am
A gasstation near the main road in the desert :)

http://noob.hu/2011/08/05/Gasstation.JPG
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: LagMaster on August 05, 2011, 09:10:11 am
cool, can we see the underground level?
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Archon93 on August 05, 2011, 03:01:52 pm
cool, can we see the underground level?
First I have to make this ;D
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Grommok on August 05, 2011, 05:01:20 pm
I suppose this is going to be a base.
Well done, really a good job, cannot wait to see underground!
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Wichura on August 05, 2011, 06:04:52 pm
It's a gas station or a fortress?
- road is way too new for Wasteland
- workbench is hardly accessible
- two counter taps? What for?
- white building is too far from petrol pumps, makes no sense
- scroll-blockers - too chaotic, I'm not sure if they work placed like this
- where did all this grass come from? It's a desert, not a pasture

Well - keep practising, even if it's your first map, I've seen much worse ones.
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Grommok on August 05, 2011, 07:03:40 pm
It's a gas station or a fortress?
- road is way too new for Wasteland
- workbench is hardly accessible
- two counter taps? What for?
- white building is too far from petrol pumps, makes no sense
- scroll-blockers - too chaotic, I'm not sure if they work placed like this
- where did all this grass come from? It's a desert, not a pasture

Well - keep practising, even if it's your first map, I've seen much worse ones.
Well, apart to the too new road, grass, and hard-to-access workbench, i dont see all those problems.
The white building might be the home of the former owner before the war, so here why isnt that near to the pumps. And for the rest, i'm not pratic, scroll blockers, counter taps... sound like mapper stuff.
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Michaelh139 on August 05, 2011, 09:34:27 pm
it looks like an ncr resupply base.
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Archon93 on August 05, 2011, 11:36:25 pm
cool, can we see the underground level?

http://kepfeltoltes.hu/view/110805/Gasstation2_www.kepfeltoltes.hu_.jpg

http://kepfeltoltes.hu/view/110805/Gasstation2b_www.kepfeltoltes.hu_.jpg
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Grommok on August 06, 2011, 11:35:56 am
Good ones, even if Michaelh139 is right. NCR resupply base.
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: SEGA_RUS on August 09, 2011, 02:29:11 am
it looks like an ncr resupply base.

or Vault City
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Ganado on September 16, 2011, 12:27:47 am
Yes, the scrollblockers on your first screen will probably cause the screen to get stuck in the lower-left part sometimes. Try to keep it as rectangle. The graveyard in the back is nice. Except for some technical things, and some better convenience, it overall looks very nice.
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Johnny Nuclear on September 16, 2011, 03:03:19 am
there is too much grass
and desert ground tiles are  badly combined
yes... and those screen blocks

otherwise map looks quite good
Title: Re: Gasstation
Post by: Surf on September 16, 2011, 10:50:27 am

- where did all this grass come from? It's a desert, not a pasture


(http://wwwdelivery.superstock.com/WI/223/1889/PreviewComp/SuperStock_1889R-16074.jpg)

(http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-_1zgkHAlnqE/TdM8aI8cFJI/AAAAAAAAAeQ/aa20d6LTimU/s1600/desert-grass.jpg)

(http://tommydahill.com/yahoo_site_admin/assets/images/BROWNGRASS!!!_JPG.6171922_std.jpg)

(http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4144/5055796156_84cfc86ba7.jpg)

(http://i.ehow.co.uk/images/a05/1d/ar/typical-desert-animals-800x800.jpg)

All of these are shot in several californian deserts, aswell 2 shots of Oregon, both locations are feautured in Fallout. 's not the Sahara here.

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Well - keep practising, even if it's your first map, I've seen much worse ones.

Agreed on that though.