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Title: Haiku!
Post by: skejwen on December 22, 2010, 09:06:37 am
Share your FOnline angst. I'll start.

It is normal day
as we stay in NCR.
Lulz! Bomber came!

Title: Re: Haiku!
Post by: Quentin Lang on December 22, 2010, 12:54:42 pm
He set the timer on,
And ran onto unsuspecting people,
With terrible things about to happen!
Title: Re: Haiku!
Post by: skejwen on December 22, 2010, 01:44:39 pm
For you seventeen
Is the number out of reach.
Three fingers are cut?

And those unaware
what Haiku really should be
the answers are here (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku_in_English).
Title: Re: Haiku!
Post by: Eternauta on December 22, 2010, 05:16:49 pm
Bluesuit wants hides
to make his tent.
What a poor guy.

He gets some enc
but just some rats.
Runs towards grid.

Suddenly shot.
Thirty hit points
below zero.

PK wants loot.
Bluesuit whispers:
...fuck u yoz kage...


Inspired by this (http://fodev.net/forum/index.php?topic=11940.msg99626#msg99626).

It is probably a shitty metre anyway, but I am no poet, and it's a bit hard for me to write literature in another language than mine. I don't really like counting syllables in English, either.
Title: Re: Haiku!
Post by: Quentin Lang on December 22, 2010, 10:50:02 pm
For you seventeen
Is the number out of reach.
Three fingers are cut?

And those unaware
what Haiku really should be
the answers are here (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku_in_English).

Art of this,
too convoluted is,
for me and my wits.

I fece on your link,
and persist as i did,
as too mulish i am.


Green fiend i are,
as you can now see,
i hope i invoke,
wrath in you.

Four lines were thoes,
false haiku i made,
and proud of that,
i certainly are.
Title: Re: Haiku!
Post by: headshot on December 23, 2010, 12:33:21 pm
Farmer, leave your plow,
take some Anti-Rads
And let's go to the Glow