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Artefacts of The Damned - A Fonline 2238 Tale: 16 Sept. Update

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gordulan:
technically this has to do with the character's backstory (he has amnesia), the modded SMG will play a crucial part later on (but I'm not to reveal anything just yet because my mood sets the scene pretty much at the moment, and this only being two parts I can pretty much fuck about with the plot and lore to a certain extent.)

Vindict:
I found one
--- Quote ---they saw my muzzle flash adn unholstered their weapons
--- End quote ---
  ;)

quite interesting tale, I'd like to read more of it

gordulan:
thanks, was looking for it all day today... can't believe I missed it, and I personally think there are way too many "and"s in the first part..., I gotta find a way to conserve the "and"s, but that's just me talking...

gordulan:
16th Sept. 2010: Updated with a new "Chapterette" : Awakening

Trying my hand at a cliffhanger style, might work out, might not... But still, Feedback would be appeciated, Since I'm caught between writing styles and I really don't want it to be sloppy or below mediocre really, so I'm actually wondering what kind ofstyle I'm gonna go with...

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