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The Adventures of LagMaster (now Spell Checked)

Started by LagMaster, June 04, 2010, 02:30:18 PM

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Haraldx

Hah, man, the newest part is great. You kicked a guy in the groin and that's the way you got in a gang? Hilarious! Great job anyway, I wanna read some more of this.
I still can be reached over e-mail if you somehow need anything from me. Don't see a reason why you would, but if you do, e-mail remains the safest bet, as I do not visit this forum reliably anymore.

LagMaster

new short content,i was rushed os is not veary much

LagMaster

New content, described my new faction members, only 3 left to describe.

Haraldx

SHUT THE F*** UP AND START WRITING!!! lol. It gets better and better, keep writing please!

Note: ''sad'' writes like ''said'', I didn't understand that from the start.
I still can be reached over e-mail if you somehow need anything from me. Don't see a reason why you would, but if you do, e-mail remains the safest bet, as I do not visit this forum reliably anymore.

LagMaster

#19
new adventures and get ready for the moast epic battle ever writen

please donate some brahmin hides in Hub to me
donated so far: 13
comment: good eughnuff,but you can offer more

Nikey646

after i get 3 of my friends a tent, i'll get u some (it'll be shared tent dw) good xp for me :P
I L0\/E T0 USE....


It takes more then stealing everything we own, to take a Hound Down.

LagMaster


LagMaster

#22
someone offered to spell check my Adventures, all hail:
Nikey646

Quentin Lang

LagMaster, you gave me an... unhealthy suprise by politely asking me to comment on your story topic...
I must say, the spellcheck has been... very... good quality... Yes... I see no more... Mistakes...                                                    whit
Right now, i havent read all stories, but i will surely do so anytime soon.
I give a fuck.

Boradam


Nikey646

Quote from: Quentin Lang on September 10, 2010, 03:02:55 PM
LagMaster, you gave me an... unhealthy suprise by politely asking me to comment on your story topic...
I must say, the spellcheck has been... very... good quality... Yes... I see no more... Mistakes...                                                    whit
Right now, i havent read all stories, but i will surely do so anytime soon.

Err, it was a rush job ^^
I L0\/E T0 USE....


It takes more then stealing everything we own, to take a Hound Down.

Haraldx

Pffft, all my gang was owned. Man, pre-wipe we were almost like anonymous gods. Oh well, I was reading so excitedly... and then I found out that none of your guys got killed  :-\ Oh, and tell me - where is the logic? You must've been somewhere about level 4, and you were able to perfectly wield all weapons you could find! Starting from a mauser, ending with P90 and sniper rifle. This reminds me of those Uber games in which as yourself you can take out about 50 nazis in WW2 (CoD 2 to be exact). Good story tho. + thanks Nikey for the spell check - much easier to read :)
I still can be reached over e-mail if you somehow need anything from me. Don't see a reason why you would, but if you do, e-mail remains the safest bet, as I do not visit this forum reliably anymore.

LagMaster

Quote from: Haraldx on September 14, 2010, 04:20:37 PM
Pffft, all my gang was owned. Man, pre-wipe we were almost like anonymous gods. Oh well, I was reading so excitedly... and then I found out that none of your guys got killed  :-\ Oh, and tell me - where is the logic? You must've been somewhere about level 4, and you were able to perfectly wield all weapons you could find! Starting from a mauser, ending with P90 and sniper rifle. This reminds me of those Uber games in which as yourself you can take out about 50 nazis in WW2 (CoD 2 to be exact). Good story tho. + thanks Nikey for the spell check - much easier to read :)
all my ex- gang members are grinder-fanatics and snipers whit 10 LK ech, i think there was about 9 luck in our side(average) vs.5-6LK from enemyes(average)


Surf

You should edit this blue color out, it is barely readable and hurts the eyes.
Also, some formatation for better readability wouldnt hurt your story too.