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supfinal:
--- Quote from: Advarsky on May 28, 2010, 07:58:14 pm ---Supfinal, welcome to the game. :)
I can say a bit crits if u won't object. The left arm of the mutant needs to be checked, especially the shoulder. And u could move the whole image to the right, 'couse that girl must be shown, not hidden in the corner of the pic. If it to be supposed that she's now pointing to the s-mutant's head with her gun - it's wrong, couse the picture tells that she's far closer to the viewer together with a monster's arm. Anyway it's a good start and i hope u finish it! :)
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If i was still younger and arrogant i will say "piss off noob you dunt know shit!!"
but yeah I notice somthing wrong with it but dunno what ir was.
thanks for pointing it out! ^^
I already fix it hope the anatomy is ok now
Cheers!
Advarsky:
Yep that's better. Now check the shoulder again - or is it the armor plate in the middle of the shoulder? - anyway it's somehow not right. Maybe u need to move it up a bit, couse he's holding her enough high. Dunno how to say right.. :)
Keep it up, i see some skills in you:D
Wise not to deny crits..:) I'm no newbie in cg.
supfinal:
--- Quote from: Alvarez on May 28, 2010, 07:42:11 pm ---Do you plan to add some background, supfinal?
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I dunno.. maybe... I dunt really have any plan i just go with the flow.
If i feel like it needs BG then i will add it later :P
--- Quote from: Advarsky on May 28, 2010, 10:52:04 pm ---Yep that's better. Now check the shoulder again - or is it the armor plate in the middle of the shoulder? - anyway it's somehow not right. Maybe u need to move it up a bit, couse he's holding her enough high. Dunno how to say right.. :)
Keep it up, i see some skills in you:D
Wise not to deny crits..:) I'm no newbie in cg.
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Yup I can sense ur kungfu is stronger.
I will try adjust it later cuz now its Fonline Time ^^
Solar:
--- Quote from: Advarsky on May 28, 2010, 10:52:04 pm ---Yep that's better. Now check the shoulder again - or is it the armor plate in the middle of the shoulder? - anyway it's somehow not right. Maybe u need to move it up a bit, couse he's holding her enough high. Dunno how to say right.. :)
Keep it up, i see some skills in you:D
Wise not to deny crits..:) I'm no newbie in cg.
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Are they all yours? Lots of different styles there, so many great pieces 8)
Updated WIP is looking good too.
supfinal:
--- Quote from: Solar on May 29, 2010, 01:05:21 am ---Are they all yours? Lots of different styles there, so many great pieces 8)
Updated WIP is looking good too.
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didnt notice the word NO is a link...
Great work! Advarsky
post it in you got deviant art?
add me if you got DA account
http://suppa-rider.deviantart.com/
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