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[chocolate_chip_cookies]

The Captain...

[ToxiCAVE]

legs are to short

[chocolate_chip_cookies]

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[Berko]

We can see from your schema that Toxicave is not wrong, captain has some problems of proportions.
Beyond this it's nice (clothes, metal effects ..)
We wait for other drawings!

[ToxiCAVE]

head and torso are to big, look where feet are and where are yours, they are little to short and cheast is to muscular.
but still good work

[chocolate_chip_cookies]

Thanks.
I appreciate that you pointed it out in a polite way.
Is it any better now?
And Toxic, he is wearing combat armor underneath his coat. He's not muscular at all

[Ox-Skull]

Being cartoony in style, proportions dont matter so much as they would in a realistic looking character.

How are u at shading choc chip, cuz itd look sweet with some nice shading like on his jacket where folds and creases are IMO.
Looks like the kinda guy u dont want to get on the bad side of.
He need side pocket with bottle of Rot gut in it.

Good work.

[chocolate_chip_cookies]

Thanks. I'm glad you get my drawing. I wouldn't try to disrespect the guy and yeah rot gut would be perfect.

It's more of a sketch so I'll leave it alone with shading. But do you mean shading with some program such as photoshop? I think it'd be pretty cool to color it and shade and whatever but I don't have photoshop skills.

[Vandal]

For some strange reason I don't see pictures from that site

Edit: I see it now, very nice drawing

[Greencell]

Overall a nice sketch but looks like him:



 

[The JokeR]

Nice draw. this to me?

[cemooooooooo]

Thats very nice Is It possibility some more

[BurnedMan]

An excellent cartoon sketch of a die-hard, battle hardened, rag-tag wasteland veteran.. comprised of concepts, including the almost mythical sea-dog of the nineteenth century and radioactive grittiness.. In other words, Captain Ahab of Moby Dick meets a barrel of radioactive goo, and proceeds to hunt a white radscorpion which had taken his leg. This is my humble analysis of the drawing. Continue to explore and master your creative talents!

[Gimper]

despite all the criticisms, i think it looks pretty awesome bro!