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Cola:
Hello there fellow wastelanders, I'm about to show you my FOnline SDK map for you.
Please post a comment if you have any idéas or want me to change something.
Tell me what you think!

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--- Quote from: Surf on April 19, 2011, 10:11:04 pm ---The grass is not fitting. The transitions from grass to desert tiles are.. nonexistant? The map is also too small in size.Too many objects/different visual styles stiffled into too tiny room. All in all typical starter mistakes, so it's not a big deal. Start to work on the points that I elaborated and report your progress later. ;)

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--- Quote from: Surf on April 20, 2011, 06:41:18 pm ---The updated map looks much better already, but there are still too many different items. Less is more - remember that. The Howitzer is unfitting too. Try to give your desert tiles a bit more order, arrange them so that "paths" appear on the map, not just random placing.

However, as said, its much better already. ;)

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standby-mode - back up working when I have more sparetime a.k.a less school

Surf:
The grass is not fitting. The transitions from grass to desert tiles are.. nonexistant? The map is also too small in size.Too many objects/different visual styles stiffled into too tiny room. All in all typical starter mistakes, so it's not a big deal. Start to work on the points that I elaborated and report your progress later. ;)

wreese2u:

--- Quote from: Surf on April 19, 2011, 10:11:04 pm ---The grass is not fitting. The transitions from grass to desert tiles are.. nonexistant? The map is also too small in size.Too many objects/different visual styles stiffled into too tiny room. All in all typical starter mistakes, so it's not a big deal. Start to work on the points that I elaborated and report your progress later. ;)

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It would be very nice as a base, but needs work

Cola:

--- Quote from: wreese2u on April 20, 2011, 12:02:00 am ---It would be very nice as a base, but needs work

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Yes sir, I know.

Y0ssarian:
I think grass could be permitted if you made said gang inside Vault City. Although questionably.. forgiven my pun... unCanonily. I mean for VC to either allow a random gang or for a gang to take interest in VC. But back on topic, it's great someone is making  maps for us Wastelanders. ^^

Punslayer

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