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skejwen:
Share your FOnline angst. I'll start.

It is normal day
as we stay in NCR.
Lulz! Bomber came!

Quentin Lang:
He set the timer on,
And ran onto unsuspecting people,
With terrible things about to happen!

skejwen:
For you seventeen
Is the number out of reach.
Three fingers are cut?

And those unaware
what Haiku really should be
the answers are here.

Eternauta:
Bluesuit wants hides
to make his tent.
What a poor guy.

He gets some enc
but just some rats.
Runs towards grid.

Suddenly shot.
Thirty hit points
below zero.

PK wants loot.
Bluesuit whispers:
...fuck u yoz kage...

Inspired by this.

It is probably a shitty metre anyway, but I am no poet, and it's a bit hard for me to write literature in another language than mine. I don't really like counting syllables in English, either.

Quentin Lang:

--- Quote from: skejwen on December 22, 2010, 01:44:39 pm ---For you seventeen
Is the number out of reach.
Three fingers are cut?

And those unaware
what Haiku really should be
the answers are here.

--- End quote ---
Art of this,
too convoluted is,
for me and my wits.

I fece on your link,
and persist as i did,
as too mulish i am.


Green fiend i are,
as you can now see,
i hope i invoke,
wrath in you.

Four lines were thoes,
false haiku i made,
and proud of that,
i certainly are.

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